John Looks Out the Window and Remembers (normal story)

 (Credits): 

--written by thewriter197 

--employed by Rocklion3000 

--Paid $300 for cowboy writing project 

--This is a piece from the cowboy story I was working on. I have changed the plot  

around a little to make the scene have a more soothing experience. You will read one  

of the scenes from that story with a new concept. The story was written in a script and novel form.

 John Looks Out the Window and Remembers (normal story)

The hotel door closes back and lock. John lights the lamp on the dresser with a match. Fire flicks in the glass and expands to the rest of the room. John sits on one of the queen sized bed. Thinking about the week. Did it go right or did he do something stupid again? A knock is heard. John gets up to unlock the door. The door moves to the side, and a woman appears wearing a long brown coat. The woman's eyes burn in red. Its Tata the girl he hasn't seen in 2 months. She walks forward slowly. John steps aside and closes the door.  She takes off the coat and throw it on the floor. Her body then rotates to John. Black panties and a pair of pale breasts flash. She unwinds the knot on the medium  length black hair untangles. Hair falls to the side. Her pretty eyes move to John's eyes. John looks for more seconds then he should. Then, he quickly removes his shirt. Unloosens the belt on his dark brown pants. Grabs her hands pulls her close. Feeling her soft skin match with his. Holding her hands like he never holded a woman before. The air in the hotel room gets hot.

Tata:  So, you....

John:  Yeah,

John:  I want to take my... and stick………

[Action]:  The lips kiss. They have sex. Meaningful and enjoyable sex. A beige sheet covers the legs.

Tata:  Why don’t you spend more time with me John?

John:  I got stuff to do. I told you that before.

Tata:  …………………………

John:  Right now, I need to make sure this contract deal goes according to plan.

John:  Those idiots I do business with, they got no mind in this shit.

John:  They….

John:  They think this is a fun and shoot when you feel like it game. 

Tata:  ..........................

John:  My brother is dead now.

John:  I wish my brother was still alive. I don't know what to do with the plan at times. I don't know maybe my predictions is off. I don't know. 

Tata:  Don't assume your going to lose out hun. I am sure you will come up with a plan and fix things. 

Tata:  ………………..Time to rest.

John:  Yeah.

John:  ………………

[Action]:  John sighs on the bed. Gets up and uses the bathroom. Then picks up the cup of water on the dresser. 

John:  Hey lets have sex one more.

Tata:   Haha, ok. 

[Action]:  Tata smiles at John in bed. Touches his cheeks. John moves her hand away and looks up at the ceiling. Tata moves under the covers and sucks John's dick to get aroused. They have sex one more time. 

(Scene 1 Part 3): John’s Brother

Later that night, John wakes up to look out the window. Seeing darkness and thinking about the next day. The work was not a honorable. John was a thief. Been doing it every since his dad died in the war. John didn't know how to find work. His body was still in its teens. John's older brother was into bank robbing. With nothing left, he talk to his brother and learn how to be a thief. John tried to go back to sleep. But, his brother's voice lingered in his mind. Always lingering and saying those words over and over. 

John’s Brother:  We didn’t make it this time.

John’s Brother:  Not one tear little brother. Not one. Never cry remember. You never cry. Its the Blue Claw's code.

 John:   Brother, your not going to die on this ground. Come on we got to......

John’s Brother:  Hey, I knew the consequences when I joined the gang and started robbing. I know this day was coming. I didn't think it would be today....you know..... hehehehehhe, awwwww, fuck, awwww.

John’s Brother:  You the leader now huh. Don’t you…………………….

John:  Brother, Brother, who's going to look out for me huh, who going to do it brother huh, brother, brother, brother………………………………………..

 [Action]:  John cries little drops. Not wanting to get off his brother's dead body. His henchmen pull on John and tell him to run. John didn't want to. He looked into his brother's unmoving eyes. Just staring at them.

The End

The Woman With the Black Revolver (normal story)

 (Credits): 

--written by thewriter197 

--employed by Rocklion3000 

--Paid $300 for cowboy writing project 

--This is a piece from the cowboy story I was working on. I have changed the plot  

around a little to make the scene have a more soothing experience. You will read one  

of the scenes from that story with a new concept. The story was written in a script and novel form.

(Scene 2 Part 3: Tata Gets a Slap):

4 meters apart from a black horse, She stands there in silence with pistol in the holster. A corpse lie on the ground near her feet. Lifeless face that is stuck on looking into her eyes. She looks down a shadow alleyway pass the body that lead to a religious structure. Then, turns around and look at the broken window of Tom's Bar. Wind blows on her back making her short black hair glide ever so slightly. Hissing the sound of quiet. She remove the revolver. Black and cold metal with a beige hilt. Gives it one more spin and then puts it away. Next, her left hand goes for the cigarette in her shirt pocket. The taste always calmed her nerves in a uncomfortable situation. The cigarette lights in her mouth. Then, blows smoke outward. She takes small breaths and wait. Two men notice her from the dark alleyway. Fixed on her animal appearance and thinking deep from the groin area. They decide to walk up to her and touch. One of them gets the feeling it was unlucky. 

Tata:  aaaahhh, 

[Action]:  Tata turns around to face the stranger. See two unarmed men. Then, holds the handle on her black revolver. 

Rice:  Hi

Tata:  You did that??

Rice:  We were just passing to the bar. Your mistaken miss.

Tata:  You don’t know huh.

Tata:  You see the gun. You see.

Tata:  ………………………………………..

Rice:  Look  we don’t know what your talking about it. Excuse us, we have to leave.

Hector:  Just passing here. Your mind might being playing tricks.  Mine tends to trick people in this desert from time to time.

Tata:  I understand. I understand precisely. 

[Action]:  Tata puts the gun away and turns around. Stands there for a few seconds. Hector sneaks up and touches her ass. 

Tata:  So.

Hector:  Uhhh , there something on your shoes. I had to get it off the feet there haha.

Tata:  hahhahahhahah, not funny. 
Rice: Hey, we didn't come here it start a ruckus. But, we would like it if you let us do what we want. We are good intentionally people. 

[Action]:  Bang, bang. Smoke escapes the pistol. She breathes out and then in. Her mouth closes. 

Tata:  I would of left you alone if you would of stopped. I don't like being touched by men I don't give permission.

Tata:  ……………………….

Tata returns to her black steed. Puts one leg over the saddle and pulls the horse brace. The horse struts forward without making a moan. Legs kick the horse's side. The steed responds with tremendous leg push and move fast. She gallops through the town and makes her way to the outskirts. Tata's red eyes dart forward and hands hold tight. Focusing on the what was to come ahead.