tgthewriter1 changes name to thewriter197 (12/2016)

-im changing my username from tgthewriter1 to thewriter197
-i have decided that it is time to pick a different name
-this will be the last time i change my name
-i wanted to change my name because i felt that tgthewriter1 was not good enough
-i felt i needed to change my name so i did
-if anybody wants to take tgthewriter1 name, you are welcomed to, its not my name anymore, however i did use tgthewriter1 on my old writing posts, so give me credit by saying this name used to belong to someone else before year 2017, 
-as of date 12/29/2016, tgthewriter1 changes the name to thewriter197

Resident Evil Sucks (video game)(review)(job test document)

(Credits):

----written by tgthewriter1
-----submitted to listverse and rejected






Top Ten Things That Need To Be Improved In The Resident Evil Video Game Series

(Comedy)

Be More Unrealistic

The Resident Evil video game series needs to be more unrealistic. Players are often pushed too far to survive. In Resident Evil Outbreak, players are put inside a random location and must figure out what to do next. No hints or tips is given in the game which makes it very time consuming for players. Zombies are constantly attacking the players and killing them with three strikes or more. Players are given weapons but the zombies seem to have more fire power. Every resident evil game seemed to be pushed too far with the idea of survival. Resident Evil games should be more unrealistic by allowing the characters to have a more life. The developers should also give the players more bullets because in every Resident Evil game there is never enough bullets. The alternative knife, the knife that is available to use in almost every Resident Evil game is not reliable. The reason the knife is not reliable is because one strike from a knife will not kill a zombie or knock it down.

Weapon Customization

Weapon Customization is only available in some games. You can not change the colors or features of the weapons. Players in modern times want guns that can be customized completely. In Resident Evil 6, players are given guns with no options to cusitomize further. There is a special way to upgrade the fire power of the guns, but players want more customization. They want guns that are different colors. They want guns that have parts that can be changed. Players want to flash their guns and be unique with them. They want guns with a customizable scope, grip, and barrerl. They want guns that represent who they are as a person. The Resident Evil game developers should imporve on the amount of options given to players for customization. Also, the game developers should include a laser with different colors in each Resident Evil game. They included that one little customization in one of the Resident Evil games but it needs to be included in every Resident Evil game.

Costumes

The costumes given in each Resident Evil game needs to be improved. Each character needs to have a wide selection of costumes. The costumes given are very limited and some are idiotic. In Resident Evil 5, players are given two costumes for each playable character. For Chris, the second costume is a zebra man suit. For Sheva, the second costume is a club outfit. Now, the game developers could have made it possible to change the colors of the clothes and add clothes that is more appropiate to a zombie invasion. Sheva wearing a club outfit is not appropiate for a zombie invasion. They should have her wearing an army outfit with full body armor or a pair of jeans and long sleeve shirt. The game developers need to think about what people would actually wear during a zombie invasion. Gamers would appreciate the game more if the charaters were wearing clothes that people would wear in a real zombie invasion.

Head Shots

Head shots in the Resident Evil game series very disappointing. When gamers play the game for the first time, gamers expect the zombie to die with one one head shot. The developers decided to not include this feature and make the head shot more like a bobble head instead. In the Resident Evil movies, a person that shoots a zombie in the head will automatically kill the zombie. But, in the Resident Evil game series a player must shoot the zombie in the head multiple times before the zombie head explodes or fall down. In Resident Evil 4, the zombies can get shot in the head atleast three times before they finally die. Then some zombies grow new heads after the original head is blown up. The bosses in the Resident Evil game series should also be able to die from just one shot to the head. The fact that you can not kill a zombie with a head shot in most of the Resident Evil game series makes the game very annoying.

Boss Fights

The boss fights in Resident Evil game series are too hard. In Resident Evil 4, there is a boss in the game with a pair of giant scissor claws. One strike from the monster in the game called “it” and your body is torn in half. The boss can also take alot of damage and is probly the hardest boss in the entire game. The game developers need to make the boss fights less difficult. In Resident Evil 5, there is a chainsaw guy that can kill you with one strike. He also seems to take a infite number of hits to his body. His only weakness is a small spot where his eye is located. It is very hard to shoot him because he moves fast and he doesn’t react when you shoot him. The game developers need to stop making the bosses in the Resident Evil game series seem invincible.

Story Line

The story line in the Resident Evil game series seem fine at first. Sadly, the storyline does not really make sense. In Resident Evil 6, the storyline is kill all the zombies and save people who are already dead. In the chapter with Leon, Leon goes to a city to find shelter and runs into a group of people. The people are stuck in a bar and Leon has to save them from the zombies. He saves the people from the zombies and then escapes the city. Then, Leon and a group of people get into a car accident. The car accident kills all the people that Leon saved. This incident makes you think that your not really saving anyone in this game are you. Are you just killing zombies and running for your life? The storyling of Resident Evil makes no sense. They send you in the city to save people and thern the people you save will end up dying. The storyline in the Resident Evil Game series needs to be fixed to give players a reason to keep playing the game or keep buying the game.

Reload Time

The reload time in the Resident Evil game series needs ti really be improved. This game is suppose to be a game not a real world survivor movie. In Resident Evil 4, it takes atleast five seconds to reload almost every weapon in the game. You can pay for a faster reload time but that is pretty much ridiculous. You would die by the time you reloaded that sniper rifle. That bolt action sniper rifle in the Resident Evil 4 game that should not have been in the game. It takes too long to load that rifle. You also have to cock the rifle after each shot. The games need an almost instant reload time that way you won’t have to think about reloading. Resident Evil is a video game but it does not play like a video game. Resident Evil game developers should make the game reload faster than it’s allowed.

The Locations

The locations in the Resident Evil game are very simular. The game developers need to make the locations of each game different. They always put the characters in buildings that look like buildings in other games. Each building should be different for each video game. Resident Evil Veronica X and Resident Evil seem like the same game. There is a house that looks almost exactly the same in both Resident Evil games. Players are not bewing introduced to new enviornments, It seems like the game is repeating itself. Players want to be surprised and experience something new in a video game. They do not want to see the same building in every game. The game developers made the locations of the game different in some ways but players might have felt like they seen the place before. If game developers do not change the view of the game, gamers might stop playing the resident evil game.

Online Play

Playing Resident Evil online is not as entertaining as it should be. In Resident Evil 6,. Players have the option to be a zombie and attack other players, but players are not given a wide range of zombies to choose from. The zombies players are given move slow and can only attack slowly. This is very fustrating to players who want to tear their opponents appart with deadly bite. Some players want to play as the boss zombies. The game developers should make more zombie choices available. Also, players canot attack eachother online. Players need to know how good they are in the game. The game only allows players to shoot at other zombies. There is no point in shooting other zombies online when you can do it offline. In Resident Evil 6, players are given a time limit which is not fair. Players being timed in the game makes the online function not fair. Players should continue playing online until health reaches zero.

The Characters  

The characters in the Resident Evil video game series need morebackground information. Once you play the Resident Evil game series for a couple years you start to wonder who the characters are. The game developers do not seem to give out too much information on who each character really is. The characters never seem to talk about their past. The characters seem like ghosts in a sense because you never know who they are. The game developers should add more cutscenes to the games in order for players to learn who each character for the game is. If the players know who the characters are, the players become more interested in the game. They also become more connected with the game and start to play the game more. When you do not include background information for the characters in each Resident Evil game, it makes it seem like you are playing with a ghost. You are playing with somebody who does not have anything important to do with the game. They are just somebody that you play the game with.

Afraid to Go to College (lifestyle)

(Credits)

-----written by tgthewriter1
------employed by Ashford University



Afraid of Going to College
When I first went to college, I was very scared. I had a good reason to be scared because I was only 18 years old. I was scared about making new friends. I never had too many friends. Next, I was scared of living up to everyone’s expectations. Society expects you to do certain things while attending college. I was also afraid of not finishing school. I didn’t have much support to begin with. Most people thought I was a lost cause. After a couple years, I realized I wanted to finish college and become something better.
Going to college meant that I might need new friends. Making new friends was something I was not good at doing. In high school, I would find a group of people to sit with at the lunch table. I would talk and become friends with them. But, I felt like I couldn’t sit with random people at the lunch table in college. Why did I feel like this? I do not really know why. I thought people would automatically shut me down in college. The fear I felt while being humiliated in college was great. I didn’t want people to make fun of me. We all have these childish feelings that we need to get rid of. After talking to some people, I realized that there was nothing to really be afraid of.
The people I talked to in college were similar to me and made me realize that I was afraid of nothing. We all had the same problems in college. We all were trying to figure out what to do with our lives. We all were nervous when talking to girls. We all did not know what to wear anymore. In college, I wanted to be Mr. Perfect, but I didn’t have to be. You don’t have to be perfect to make new friends. All you really need to do is to be your self. There was a few people in college who didn’t like me. I usually do not get along with people who don’t like me. So, I stay away from the drama people. I was afraid to make friends in college, but I learned to over come my fear once I talked to a few people.
Expectations, almost scared me to death in college. Everybody who goes to college has crazy expectations. Some expectations come from parents. Others come from social media and society. While I was attending college, people expected me to study and get good grades. They expected me to be the best in every class. People expected me to have the best grades in college. Good grades might not be something everybody would call expectations but I was expected to have them. So, I was terrified of getting an F on any assignment. When I did get an F, my heart was beating really fast. I could hear it beating in my chest. I became filled with such fear. I was afraid if people knew I would get made fun of. I found other people who also got bad grades and college. I learned to relax about my high grade expectation.
Another expectation that people gave me was dating a lot of girls in college. Now, I didn’t want people talking about me so I asked out a bunch of girls. I only ended up dating a few of them. I couldn’t believe I was afraid of girls back then. When I was asking girls out back then, I was so scared that I tried really hard to be perfect. However, being perfect does not get the results. I was extremely nervous talking to girls. I believed the main reason I was nervous was because I trying to impress my friends, my family, and society. I wasn’t asking girls out to impress my self. I was doing something so I could brag about it. Later, I realized what I was doing and decided to only talk to girls when I feel like it. What I was doing was very stupid. Trying to impress people who do not care about me. The expectation that I had to date a lot of girls was stupid. But, I was afraid of it. Later, I decided to get over that expectation by not caring about other people’s expectations. I was afraid of it but I needed to overcome it. I soon realized that I was an adult and what I do is my business. I don’t need to date a bunch of girls to feel important. You only need one girl to feel important.
Not being able to finish school was something I was also afraid of. In college, there were points that made me feel like college was not important. Points that caused me to have doubts. I wasn’t getting paid much to go to college. I wasn’t always getting good grades. I wasn’t being supported enough to go to college. I was afraid that I was going to drop out of college. There was so many things in my life going on. I was trying to balance things and I got frustrated. Balancing things was driving me crazy in college. I gained a huge fear of dropping out because I had a hard time balancing things. In any event, I always had a heard time balancing things. So, I had to figure out a way to overcome that fear which is to finish school no matter what happens next. In life, you can’t quit your job because your love life is not working out or because someone did something embarrassing to you. You have to finish your career goals because life goes on. I felt like I needed to move up in the world one way or another.
While I was going to college, I had many things on my mind that mad me afraid. I was afraid of not finishing school because I had a hard time balancing things. I was afraid of living up to everybody’s expectations because I wanted everybody to like me. I was afraid of making new friends because I didn’t want to get humiliated. I was afraid of a lot of things when I first went to college, but I figured out how to overcome it. I overcame all my fears by realizing one simple thing. I realize that my life is my business. If I do not want to live up to everybody’s expectations, then I need to learn how to live with it. Life is full of possibilities.

Lost On the Way (story script)

(Credits)

-----written by tgthewriter1
-----employed by Ashford University



Title: Lost on the High Way

     Lost..............I feel so lost. Where am I? What have I done to deserve this? It all started on November 17th. The day it rained and rained. The day I got lost on the high way. The day I didn’t know who I was. At the night of Nov. 17th, I looked at the punch sheet and pushed the button. I told my self, “I can’t wait till I leave this job.” I been working at this K-Mart job for 4 years. It wasn’t a part of the plan but when does anything go exactly as planned. I decide to go to the bathroom to rub my eyes a bit. Trying to get some life to face. I see the slightly dark circles on my face. I look at the time on my cell and notice that it is past 10:00pm. I rotate my head in a clockwise rotation. Then, I decided to leave the K-Mart place and head to the high way. I decided to take a different route home this time. I usually take the street route home, but I was feeling a different road. I wanted a longer drive to take time out to think. Sometimes, taking time out to think is what keeps my mind in check. I opened the car and turned on the radio. Nothing to listen to. I backed up the car and hit the gas.
     The car fled off into the street like a space ship. It was dark and I was the only car on the road. I keep driving for miles and miles. Thinking about my life. Why am I still working at K-Mart? After all this time, I am still putting up with the mental abuse and the frustration of not following my dreams. (sigh) I suddenly realize that I didn’t make my turn. I then started panic. Maybe I was overacting a bit. What did I just....there I was driving and driving. I lost my sense of direction but acted like I knew where to go. I missed my turn and I do not know how to get back. I am lost. I told my self, “I need to think happy thoughts.” I turned the car around and assumed I was the only one on the road. But, I was wrong. There was a truck blowing the horn at me. It zoomed past me.
     My heart was beating fast. The car spun around a couple times. What was that? It took me awhile to collect my self. I had to sit i my car seat. I had to just wait. Catch my breathe and be happy I didn't die. I looked at the dashboard for a couple minutes. Maybe it was four. I have no idea. Then, I begin to hear a bell sound. A sound some say you hear when your about to die. I now hear the rain. It is getting more fierce and more consistent. “Maybe I should park my car for awhile,” I said to myself. I noticed the gas tank being empty. Today was not my day. I decided I would do something new and this is what happened. Ok, maybe I am just overreacting? Some people say, “it is always your fault.” I disagree because I can’t control what people do to me. Wait, I am getting sidetracked again. Back to the story. The next thing I know I see a man walking. He has a gun. I wasn't  a gun lover but I wish I had one right about now. I begin to panic and think of a way out. No, it is too late. What does this guy want? My life?
      The guy continues to walk closer and closer to my car. I see the man waving his hand. I didn’t roll down my window because I was scared. The guy knocks on the window. So, I roll down my window and see what’s up. The guy says, “what’s your problem?” I tell him, “I am lost and I don’t know where my turn is?” He looks at me and says, “you need to give me a ride or else........” I replied to the man by saying “Um....” The next thing I know the guy points the gun directly on me. I look at the gun and it looks real enough. My heart begins to beat fast. I can hear the motion. I give the man a nod and I open my right door. The man gets in the car and tells me to drive. I drive without thinking about it. I didn’t want him to shoot me. We drive and drive. Some distance goes by. It seems quiet in the car at first. Then, I heard my heart again and thinking of how not to upset him. I didn’t want to die today. It is too soon. I looked at the stranger and noticed that he was a smoker.
     So, he looks at me and says, “Why do you still work at K-Mart?” He knows the uniform. I tell him “I need a job you know?” Then the stranger says, “We all need jobs but you need a purpose.” I looked at him and wondered. What does he mean? I need purpose. I ask the stranger, “What you mean?” The stranger looks at me and when I look back at him while driving I feel his eyes piercing through my soul. I see red eyes lunching into me like a arrow touching a person with gold coins. The stranger says, “you wasn’t meant to work at K-Mart forever.” I responded, “But, I need money so what I am going to do?” He responds, “money is for paying bills and nothing more. You can not assume that money will give you more then what you need.” He looked at me and I knew he was telling the truth but how could I really leave my job. It is not that simple.
      All I really had was this job. I didn’t have a girlfriend. I didn’t have education. I did attend school, but I decided to drop out when things got too hard to deal with. I didn’t have friends. Now that I think about it. Maybe I should of quit my job and went back to school. Many people will hate me. But, I need an education. I been working at this crappy job for four years and I have nothing to show for it. I have nothing to show for it. Maybe the stranger is right. Maybe I do need to quit my job.
     The stranger then tells me to stop the car. I stop the car and stranger gets out. Then he says, “don’t be stupid.” The next thing I know I wake up and realize that I fell asleep in the parking lot.I been sleeping the whole time. But, the dream felt so real. Was the man a spirit and was the man telling the truth? It is hard to say. But, that is the end of the story. It might not be a good reason. That is why I decided to pursue my dream. A lot harder then usual.

Dont Drink Too Much Alcohol (lifestyle)

(CREDITS):

-written by tgthewriter1

-employed by postloop 

Yes, it is a problem to feel invincible because some people in this world have guns and others are really big. I seen this guy break another guy’s face with one punch. You have to know your limits in this world. You can not let alcohol blind you from a fight you can not handle. Given the right circumstances, you should take the risk. However, do not take unnecessary risks. Do not let alcohol persuade you to take unnecessary risks. 

You Ever Get Tired of Racing Games (video game)(lifestyle)

(CREDITS):

-written by tgthewriter1

-employed by postloop 

I do tend to get tired of racing games. The only reason I get tired of racing games is because of scenery. I was playing Midnight Club: Los Angeles and I got bored of it. I had a great time playing the game but I get tired of the scenery. They should make the game bigger. They should add more cities to the game so players would play the game for a longer period of time. 

Rainbow Stage in Mario Kart 64 (video game)(review)

(CREDITS):

-written by tgthewriter1
-employed by postloop 



My favorite stage is the rainbow stage. This race stage is very beautiful and very magical. I know what I have just said sounds strange, but you have to play the game to know what I mean by “magical.” The stage is long and very creepy at certain times. The stage is must play for anyone who has never played Mario Kart 64. Test the stage to find out more. 

Hunger Is What Kills Me (Story Script)(Complete ED)

(SCENE 1):

Date: 06/03/2015

*******(small requirement with script)

THESE THREE ACTIONS THAT MUST ALWAYS BE DONE TOGETHER:STOMACH GROWLS-GIRL RUBS/PATS STOMACH-GIRL COMPLAINS OF HUNGER AND HOW EMPTY AND HUNGRY HER TUMMY IS THE WORD STOMACH TUMMY OR BELLY MUST BE IN EVERY HUNGER COMPLAIN. 

I. (The Beginning)

******Scene 1: (The Message)

(News Broadcast Report Messege)

    Lately, there has been alot of young girls committing suicide in the past couple months. Our resources tell us that women commit suicide because don’t have enough material stuff. There has also been a large shortage of jobs in recent years, which prevent most girls from having everything that their little heart desires. Its funny Jenny, how girls want to have everthing and now because of the horrible economy, it’s just not possible for them to have it anymore.

    (Sapphire Cuts TV Off)

    Sapphire decides to turn the T.V. off and moans “ooohhhh this is making my tummy hurts so much. Why can’t I find a job so I can eat something else besides noodles today?” Sapphire looks out the window and see a couple that has more material objects then she has. (Sapphire thinks: I hate those people over there with their perfect life)

Sapphire: I wish that was me, if I had more money I would be happy too I suppose.

Sapphire: (sigh) (gasp for air)

----Raven, a friend of Sapphire comes into the living room and looks at Sapphire in a good smiling way.

Raven: Hey, what’s your problem?

Sapphire: my problem, my problem, my stomach is the problem…………. …..(sapphire’s stomach growls)….. why else would I complain about my tummy? I’m rubbing it now so I can go on another day, but how far can I go on?

Raven: What

Raven: we only have enough food to eat once a day. I don’t care if your tummy hurts. We need to survive. We have just enough to last until the next time we receive money which is uhhhhh next week.

Sapphire: Survive, is that all we do………………, all we do is survive, survive. I’m hungry right now, my tummy is so empty and it’s growling. (Sapphire Looks at her stomach and touches it).

Sapphire: If all you want to do is survive. Another 6 months of noodles. We been surviving for the past 6 months and I’m tired of this shit.

Sapphire: I want some meat, some nice juicy meat for my tummy. I don’t care about the costs. The bills, (sigh) they will never stop coming………..

Raven: Hey, I know your tired of eating noodles and McDonalds, but this is the best that we can do for now, ok. Our tummies that are so famished and (raven stomach growls)……….is just going to have to wait. (Raven rubs her stomach very slowly). This belly is just going to have to manage off of Noodles and baloney. Fuck, I hate this.

Sapphire: No, it’s not ok, I want to be somebody. I’m tired of being some broke bitch. I’m tired of my stomach growling………….(Sapphire stomach growls)………do you hear that sound. . (Sapphire rubs her tummy). My stomach is making a constant noise. Growling, and growling, I can hear it, Raven, I can hear it.

Sapphire: this hunger is killing me, its just killing me.

Raven: well, maybe if you would look for a job, we wouldn’t be eating noodles all the time.

Sapphire: I have been looking for a job, but I can’t seem to find anything and my stomach is growling more and hungrier by the minute. (Sapphire stomach growls)……..I am tired of this belly. (Sapphire rubs her tummy).

Sapphire: I’m anxious for something tastier then this crappy meal. I’m also tired of this dump.

Raven: hey it’s a dump but we have to make due, we lost our last job as a super heroes so we are going to live here now. Teen Titans was fired by the government because crime is not involved with super criminals anymore.

Sapphire: I hate this place, look at that roach crawling on the T.V.

Sapphire: no how many we kill they keep coming back.

Raven notices a big insect crawling on the T.V.

Raven: we are in low class neighborhood, insects are more frequent here than in other areas.

Raven: Besides, I believe that’s a grasshopper. Its kind of big because it has a yellow color to it, it’s bigger than it is on T.V.

Sapphire: who cares if it is, it’s annoying me and still an annoying roach.

Sapphire: AAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! When are things going to change, when am I going to be able to eat some decent food for once. (Sapphire’s stomach growls). I wish I had something with meat for my tummy. (Sapphire rubs her stomach again). I don’t need a diet.

Raven: by the way, we……….we got something in the mail.

Sapphire: What is it?

Raven: it’s a letter from a company that say, that they will pay us to be part of an experiment for the Unicornian Company.

SIDE NOTE: (Unicornian, is a word that has been said before, google it for more details, it has something to do with unicorns and horses, girly things).

Sapphire: well, we are going to do it because, I am starving and I’m just tired of eating once a day……………….

Raven: ok, if this will change our poor situation, let’s take a chance.

Sapphire: I hope it’s not another scam.

Sapphire: you remember that one time.

Raven: Sapphire, hush, besides we are desperate.

Raven and Sapphire hear their stomach growl constantly. Their stomach begins to make all kinds of sounds and groans. The girls rub each other’s stomachs and start squeezing their breast too. Raven: I hate this dam economy, I hate everything.

-----Then, they decide to call the Unicornian Company listed in the message and take them up on their offer.

A strange man answers the phone.

Strange man: Hello, who is this?

Sapphire: hi, (her stomach growls uncontrollably) , dam stomach, (she holds her stomach and speak)

Sapphire: uhhhhh

Sapphire: (stomach growls again)

Strange man: I think understand why you called, hahahaah

Strange man: Do you want us to take you to the location of the experiment.

Sapphire: yes please, take me and my friend to the place.

Strange man: ok, we will be there shortly.

Sapphire‘s stomach continues to make strange noises. Raven rubs her tummy to make Sapphire feel better. But, for some reason it never makes Sapphire feel better. Sapphire: Raven, Raven we got to get out of this shit hole, we are trapped, hopefully this risk we take will save us.

Scene 2 (arriving at the Unicornian facility)

Sapphire and raven are riding in a limo to the Unicornian facility. The guard takes them to the building and ask them some questions.

Guard: So you girls know what you are doing right?

Raven: yes, my tummy has been killing me for the past six months. (Raven stomach growls)………my stomach is making noises. (Raven touches her stomach)

Raven: you see, every since we lost our jobs as super heroes…………we …………Ben eating noodles.

Sapphire: is this experiment dangerous

Guard: it's very simple and safe mam....and your tummy will be fine.

Guard: there is something I should tell you. Something small and personal.

Sapphire: does it have to do with food because my tummy hurts…….(Sapphire stomach growls)……(Sapphire touches her stomach and wonders if her fate will be changed). 

(Fate: Some say you are destined to work at Mcdonalds forever, but if you do not want that then maybe you should take a risk. No Risk, you will be that old guy at Mcdonalds. )

Guard: yes it does,

Sapphire: this better be legit, my tummy is calling for something to end its suffering. So what is it?

Guard: (she sound sexy when she say that)

Guard:  so....sapphire are you single?

Sapphire: yes but if you not gonna provide me with decent food then well….im not.

Sapphire: I'm not in the mood for love or a sex encounter. My…………aaaahhh….. I'm so famished.

Sapphire: I don't have enough energy for sex right  now.

Guard: what if you let me just give you a ruby dub dub on my dick.

Sapphire: on my tummy we'll. Maybe you can....I mean uhh no.

Sapphire: (what am I thinking sleeping with this guy for food, fuck, what I am thinking.) (Its has been awile since I had some, but……….noooo, I need to eat. )

Sapphire: no ok

Guard: ok....you just look so amazing.

Guard:  ok we almost arrived to the Unicornian facility.

Guard: any questions.

Raven: yeah how much are we getting paid?

Guard: you will get paid enough. Don't worry

Guard: (you will also die you stupid batch) (she has no idea, should I rape her hmmmm). 

Guard: ok we have arrived at the destination.

Raven: thank some spiritual force, my stomach is really annoying me with these noises. (Raven stomach growls). My stomach is saying are we there yet?

---Sapphire and raven arrive at the facility. They hope they will receive what their stomach desires. But, it turns out to be something much much worse.

Scene 3: (being put in prison and other prisoners talk)

-sapphire and raven look up to a triangle shaped structure with a big structure building in the middle. The building is very tall and has short green cut grass on the outside.

Raven: this place is strange. I hope they have food in there.

Sapphire: yeah me…… too.

A sound comes from behind. A car door closes and the sound of boots is heard in the background. Someone shouts “lock them up quickly.”

Sapphire: noooo....what going on

Raven: this is bullshit. And I'm still hungry…..(Raven stomach growls)……(she rubs her stomach).

Guard: we are going to rape you girls

Raven: Say WHAT…………………..

The girls stood in shock and then the fear kicked in, they start acting innocent in order to convince the guards to let them go. But, it does not work.

SIDE Note: Some women need to know that they can be touched. 

Raven: noo....can we eat first.

Guard: noooo you pathetic bitch

Guard: put bags over their heads.

-the girls are tied up and bags are put over their heads.

Sapphire: mmmmmmmmmmmmm

Sapphire: (stomach makes loud growl), im tired of my stomach, im tired of this hunger, im tired of talking about my stomach…………..(Sapphire rubs stomach is feels a slight anger).

The girls get taken away to a jail cell. Scared and hungry. Wishing they would of just stuck to eating noodles. What they wanted have cost something………………… but what was it.

Raven: are you taking us to our meal?

Guard: no I'm taking you to your dungeon.

Sapphire: What, what you mean?

Sapphire: Dungeon

Raven: when are you going to give us food.

Guard: when you learned your lesson.

Guard: your lesson with your stomach.

Sapphire: my stomach has been making noises this whole trip. (Sapphire stomach growls) ……………(She holds her stomach together)

Sapphire: if you don't release us, I’ll…………………

Sapphire: I will kill you

Guard: yeah some skinny bitch with a empty stomach and no energy is gonna kill me. heehheheheheheh

Guard: I tell you what. Suck my dick and I will give you a cookie.

Sapphire: maybe if you wasn't a ass I would suck your dick for free

Sapphire: (Sometimes I have sex with guys for free because I feel like sex is better and more important then money.)

Sapphire: I guess I won't do it

Guard: well you miss your chance.

Sapphire: my chance to suck your little pick.

Guard: shut up. I'm working on it. You think it’s easy to make a dick grow, it takes months of masturbation.

Guard:  push them in the cell.

The girls get pushed in the cell. The gate is closed behind them.

Raven: what the fuck is going on.

Sapphire: I don't know but I hope He feeds us.

Sapphire: my stomach....is moaning again. (Sapphire stomach growls and she rubs it)

Raven: hey let's sit closer together.

Raven rubs sapphire's stomach

Sapphire: are we going to die

Raven: looks like it, this could be it, unfortunately.

Then they hear the tv cut on. There is man wearing a white suit with a white mask. He sits in the darkness on a chair, only part of this man is shown.

White mask: hi you can call me, just call me the white mask.

White mask: in this experiment you will starve to death. Why, well well, I feel that….

White mask: that young girls need to be taught a lesson for being spoiled brats.

White mask:   hahahahahahahaahah, have fun, ahahahaahhahaha.

The tv cuts off.

Sapphire: this sucks. Who is that guy, that white mask, or whatever

Raven:  yeah I don’t know who he is, but he said we are stuck here.

Sapphire: my stomach…………….im going to kill that guy.

Sapphire: (suddenly I want to start crying)

Sapphire:  (She cries )

Raven: shut up. Your crying is making my stomach hurt more. (Raven is touched by sapphire’s hand. Raven’s stomach is rubbed by Sapphire.)

Scene 3 (other girls being tortured)

Two groups of girls are being tortured in different buildings. powerpuff girls in one building and dbz(dragon ball z) girls in the other.

Powerpuff girls

Bubbles: how long we been here. I'm so hungry. (Bubbles touches stomach). (Bubbles’s stomach is rubbed by blossom’s hand).

Blossom: bubbles shut up your making my tummy hurt too.

----They here drops of water in some direction. It makes me feel like there time is running out. The drops of water acts like seconds on a stopwatch. Atleast to them.

Buttercup: I Ben here for awhile and my stomach is starting to talk to.me. (Buttercup stomach growls). (She rub her stomach).

Bubbles: what's it say

Buttercup: feed me..just feed me.

Blossom: maybe we should talk about something else to take our mind off hunger.

Buttercup: yeah me too. I feel like I regret things in my my life.

Bubbles: like what

Buttercup: if I wasn't so greed for a fancy life style, we wouldn't be here, starving.

Buttercup: I feel like maybe I should of did more in life then just buy a bunch of stuff.

Due to long periods of being without food, the girl’s minds start to think less material and more human like…………….their stomach is talking to them.

Bubbles: well it's what you ……you do…..what I see……..i just……….. stomach is so dry. (Bubbles rubs her stomach but it helps her only a little.)

Blossom:  yeah I mean most of us woman buy stuff to be happy....but why do we do keep doing it.

Buttercup: it's what society wants so. I mean most of our friends do it.

Bubbles: friends....where are they now when our stomach is making so many noises to the point where we think it's talking to us. (the girls stomach growls). Or maybe the mind is tired of us not paying any attention to it.

Bubbles: where are our friends now?

Buttercup: shit, we don't have any friends...he'll if we did they wouldn't have cut us off. Once we lost our job as super heroes. They just left us, some in oooo I’m busy type of ways.

Buttercup: look we all we got now.  Nobody care about bums like us.

Blossom: we may be bums but we are still people.  Atleast that’s what I hope,, we are.

Bubbles:  I'm so hungry.....god does anybody care. (bubbles stomach growls) , (she rubs her stomach again).

Blossom: god left us a long time ago. There no sense in saying his name.

Bubbles: but........

Bubbles: we are alone now , don’t you get it, and about to die in this place

Buttercup: fuck god, where was god when we were digging in the trash can for food. 

Buttercup:  there was no god. There never was. Fuck……………….

Buttercup: he lets people torture us to death

Buttercup: I can see my bones starting to show.  In my tummy

Buttercup: I fucking hate this place.

Bubbles: (crying)

Blossom: look we have to get out of here. There so many things I want to do with my life.

Guard bangs on the walls.....

Guard: if you suck my dick I will give you cookie.

Blossom: no way

Guard:  fine starve to death.

Guard: stupid sluts, your getting what you deserve, all those lives you ruined so you can buy your stupid stuff.

Bubbles: you see how people treat us,,,,,,,like shit.

Bubbles: it's your fault we should have stayed with eating bread pieces

Buttercup: that's no way to live.

Blossom: it's never enough......

Bubbles: what

Blossom: like no.matter how much money we have or how much stuff we have. It's never enough.

Bubbles: I see

Blossom: we are always hungry. We always want more and more.

Blossom: .my stomach is growling but it's never full. It's a unsatisfying bastard.

Blossom: I think life is like this. hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Bubbles: yeah how.

Blossom: Look we are never satisfied in life. Nothing in life is ever enough.

Buttercup: all the stuff we buy is gonna be worthless in future.

Blossom: exactly.....everything we buy is fucking worthless.

Blossom: I mean look at us , we were so desperate for money that we were would do anything. 

Buttercup: you sound like hunger is what kills us.

Blossom: it is what kills us. 

 Blossom: as our stomachs growl and growls, greed gets bigger and bigger. (Blossom stomach growls) , (the other two girls rub her stomach.)

Buttercup: my stomach is making me think some evil things.

Buttercup: my stomach is making me a monster. I have to control it.

Buttercup: I can't seem to think about anything. That's good anymore. All I want to do is make money and I don't care about friends anymore.

Buttercup: my stomach is what kills me. It's what killing me inside. I have to control this……………………….but how. How can I? (Buttercup rubs her stomach.) (Buttercup stomach growls.)

Dragon ball z

Videl:  I miss gohan so much.

Chi chi: gohan is dead. Remember

Chi chi: that's why we decided to participate in this experiment.

Chi chi: the government took things from us. Took our husband's away.

Chi chi: my stomach is parched...And making me see things. (Chi chi rubs her stomach and here it growl.)

Bulma: I hate the government. They always taking things from us.

Bulma: .we really have a democracy. But, Our votes don't even count. Anymore. Not math wise.

Bulma: my stomach it's so...famished. fuck .I’m .so tired. (bulma looks at her empty stomach and hears it) , I’m tired of rubbing my tummy.

Bulma: I can't even sleep because of this hunger. I mean what is this. I can't even think because of this hunger.

Videl: hunger is a demon that needs to be destroyed.

Videl: how long we Ben here.

Chi chi: long enough

Chi chi: shit I'm so hungry I can't even keep track of time. I can't keep track of anything. (Chi chi stomach growls) (she is in dire pain) (she rubs her stomach slowly due to the lack of energy)

Chi Chi: hunger needs to be controlled or it will consume us. Atleast on the inside, turning our hearts to black, fuck.

Hunger is what kills me (final re-edit) part 3

• by animeatru, Jun 22, 2015, 2:37:48 PM
• Journals / Personal

Scene 3 (girls talking in cell)

Chi chi: yeah, so why are we here

Videl: I dont know. We need better food

Chi chi: but look where it got us

Chi chi: we wanted more but now we are hungry

Videl: yes my stomach is so empty. (Videl rubs her stomach) , (videl stomach growls) .

Videl: it makes me think, maybe I have always been empty

Bulma: what yoou mean?, empty, your taslking crazy

Videl: crazy, shit, im so hungry i can’t even think (her stomach growls) (she rubs it)

Videl: I want food more than anything else

Bulma: food is like something for our body right

Videl: yes, but our body is never full

Bulma: chi chi\

Chi chi: aaahhh what…………I can barely hear my stomach, (she rubs her tummy and hear her stomach growl)

Bulma: chi chi

Chi chi: (stomach is so empty, I can’t think right now)

Bulma: what

CHi Chi: i cant think, maybe our wanting more is what is killing us.

Bulma: well....... Wanting is what got us here

Bulma: wanting is what got us here

Bulma: wanting is what got us here

Bulma: it’s what got us lock up in first place.

Videl: wanting is what got us here

Videl: wanting is what got us here

Videl: here we are about to die,

Videl: because we wanted more

Bulma: my stomach is always hungry, my tummy is always empty (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Bulma: why are we here, i mean dont we have enough stuff

Bulma: dont we have enough uhhhhh, material shit

Bulma: we are dying, none of the material shit matters now,

Videl:  my stomach is making me think the same thing

Videl: i mean, maybe if decided we didnt want everything we would have been better off. Look what our want is costing us.

Chi chi: our want.....our want means nothing, if we want.....

Chi chi: if we want everything, like

Chi chi: we will end up with nothing

Videl: im not sure about anything anymore, all i know is that wanting is causing me more pain than i thought.,

Videl: when i was a child i wanted a few things,

Videl: a few things.........

Videl: now, at the time when my tummy is feeling so dry, i feel that...........(all the girls rub eachother stomachs after hearing them all growl)

Chi chi: feel what

Videl: i feel that me wanting alot of things is bad

Videl: very bad

Bulma: i suppose if we wanted a few things we wouldnt be here

Bulma:  almost starving to death,, my hungry stomach makes me realize that, that, me wanting alot of things is killing me (she touches her belly) (stomach growls)

Bulma: my stomach is in much pain that i, only want one thing now and thats food

Bulma: i dont want cars, i dont want clothes, i dont want to be popular

Bulma; i bet if I only wanted a few things i wouldnt be so sad

Bulma: i wouldnt be so unsatisfied

Videl: we chose to be here because we wanted too many things

Videlur greed was the key to this prison.

Videl: its our punishment, to have are tummies ripped open

Videl: too many things that did not matter to begin with

Videl: (too many, too much, too much stuff, caused us pain )

Chi Chi: aaawwww fuck

-suddenly a guard walk over to the cage and talks to the dragon ball z girls.

Guard: having fun ladies

Videl: noooo, let us out here

Chi Chi: please

Bulma: yeah pretty please

Guard: uhhhhhhh

Guard: no, hahahahahahahah

Guard: you bitches are geting what you deserve

Guard: think about all the lives you ruined with your wants

Guard; wants for material objects, wants for expensive shit, wants for an expensive unearned lifestyle

Bulma: i just want to kick your ass for putting us in here

Guard: well tuff tiddy bitch

Bulma: bitch, aaaaahahahahahahahaah

Bulma: oooohhhhh my stomach, fuck (gowling) (she rubs her tummy slowly)

Guard: hahahahahahahaahahahhaa

-the guard walks away. The girls watch him walk away and then they here the television turn on AGAIN.

The white mask: ladies, how do you feel

White mask: do you feel tired, hungry, do you feel famished

White mask: so have you figured it out yet...........

Chi chi: aaaaaaa what, figured what out

White mask: the meaning of life, have you figured it out

Ch CHi: the meaning of life, is that why we are here

Chi chi: with our tummies hanging in and shit (all stomachs growl, each girls rubs their tummy) 

CHi chi: go fuck your self, thats the meaning of life

White mask: thats the wrong answer, give me the right one

White mask: or you will die here

White mask: no more sunny days, no more shopping

White mask: no more, ooooooo look at me im so pretty, look at me

White mask: look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me, look at me

White mask: figure it out ladies, or die here,

White mask: ahahahahahahahahahahahahga

White mask: its time to move to phase two, lets make this more interesting, move all the girls to building zero holding cell

Guard: yes sir

-the guard takes the girls out of the cells and move them to building zero......all the girls meet eachother for the first time.

Scene 4 (the girls are pushed in the same room)

-the girls see eachother for the first time, in hold up, they enter a giant glass room with a big tv in the middle, \

Videl: how did you guys get here?

Blossom; we signed up for this experiment to make some money

Raven: and you ended up here right, yeah we did too

Videl: got any food, we are so hungry (she rubs her tummy as it growls)

Starfire; yeah im thinking about eating one of you

All: ahahahahahah ooooowowowowowowowowowowww, shit

Starfire: so how we get out?

Raven: we have to find the meaning of life, is that what they told you guys

ALL: they nodd their head

Chi chi: fuck im hungry., so very hungry, how the fuck we get out of here

Chichi:AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Raven: hey calm your ass down, we all hungry

Raven: so what we know so far.....

Bubbles: aaaahahahahahahahahahahahhah my stomach hurts too much (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Buttercup: i will shut het up, keep talking

Buttercup, punches bubbles in the mouth to shut her up

Videl: I’ll lead the conversation

Videl: so....all we know so far is that the meaning of life, is uhhhhhh

Buttercup: the meaning life is my ass

Videl: this is serious, how we gonna get out of here, if we dont know

Videl: I for one am tired of being hungry, like fuck (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Vidl: any ideas anybody have ideas

CHi CHi: im too hungry too think

Videl: look put your stomach aside, if you don’t think, we are all dead

(SIDE NOTE: If you don’t think you are very much so dead. You don’t believe in something you will believe in anything.)

Sapphire : this is bullshit, how we suppose to know

Videl: maybe we should start with a postive attitude or solutions

Sapphire; hmmmmmmmmm

Buttercup: the meaning of life is fuk............uhhhhhh

Buttercup; to have a bunch of stuff

Blossom: nooo, that is what got us here, starving to death with our stomachs all sore and shit, we need another answer

Bubble: she right

Raven: maybe there is no point to life

Raven: we all gona die anyway

Videl; how can you say that

Videl: why don’t you just kill your self, if that’s what you believe

Raven: well maybe I will

Videl: then do it

-the girls then stare at raven and wonder if she has the balls to kill herself

Raven: (thinking hard, knew, she couldn’t do it, she wants to live, )

Raven: I can’t do it,

Videl: yeah, I knew it, if you believe that you would have just killed yourself

Videl: you got to stop[p telling yourself things to be finished quickly, I mean do you want your life to be ended quickly,

SIDE NOTE: If you want to be finished with life quickly, do things quickly, but you will die quickly.

Videl: stop rushing this,

Videl: anybody else

Bubbles; maybe the meaning of life is to have alot of money

Bubbles: money does make the world go around right.

Bubbles: right

Blossom: my stomach runs on food not money, I would rather have food than money, money does not keep me alive, I know that now (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blossom:  it’s a shame I only realize that at the point when I’m about to die...

Sapphire: so......

Blossom: I’m not finished

sapphire: .................fuck me.............(my stomach growls) (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blossom: ok, like I was saying, fuck I’m hungry (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blossom: maybe the point of life is to eat and eat and die.

Bubbles: that’s, stupid

Bubbles: if that’s the point of life then

Raven: then all we should do in life is eat, now that sounds boring

Bubbles: I suppose

Blossom: well I’m probably wrong, shit I cant think straight on a empty stomach (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Stapphire: how are we suppose to find the meaning of life when we can’t think on a empty stomach

Raven: I don’t know but, if we don’t figure out something

Raven: we will be stuck here forever

Chi chi: forever, where is a hero when you need one

Blossom: look we got to figure this question out, let’s stop wondering off and focus

Chi chi: my stomach is just too hungry, count me out of this (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blossom: stupid bitch

Chi chi: .........................

Chi chi: .........................fuck you

Buttercup: ok, I have an idea

Buttercup: what if the point of life is tooo be good all the time

Videl: nooo, that gets boring after awile,

VIdel: besides how can anyone be good, all the time

Bubbles: I can

Videl: so you always tell the truth, cause once you lie your not a good person anymore,

Bubbles: well shit it’s hard not to lie, I mean if not lie, then maybe we could could be all good

Videl: so being good can’t be the point of life, because it’s boring and hard to do

Blossom: you know every since I ben starving in this place

Blossom: my stomach has been making me think some evil things

Sapphire: like what

Blossom: like I’m thinking about eating one of you because I’m so hungry., my tummy is just is such such hungynesssss, im hungry

Buttercup: we are all hungry, what you mean evil thoughts that’s not like you (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blosssom: look things in our lives have not been going well therefore, we have evil thoughts right now.

Blossom: and the hunger is making it worse, making me think of some evil thoughts, such as stealing, or killing one of you.

Blossom: I did not have these thoughts until i was hungry

Blossom: hunger, our stomach is very evil, it’s never full and when it’s hungry it tries to persuade us to do evil acts, do any of you feel like doing something bad.

Raven: yes, I’m thinking about killing one of you, or killing myself, my stomach is making me think evil things (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Bulma: mine too, I did not have these thoughts until my stomach was starving........this stomach is turning us into something,,,,,,bad (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Bubbles: yes, me too, like I want to eat one of you to stop me from being hungry, and stuff.

Videl: I too have evil thoughts, I believe it was caused from this stomach, I use to think about gohan, my late husband, alot,  but because I ben so hungry lately, I haven’t been thinking about him. (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Videl: my tummy is so empty that I’m only thinking of myself, I mean there has to be more to life then my stomach, more to life then having a bunch of stuff. (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Blossom: I mean I think I get what your saying,

Blossom: like uhhhhhhh......

Raven: like our stomaCH IS NEVER FULL  , it hungers on and on for eternity..,.... (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Raven: our stomach is never fulll, what’s the point of feeding it alot, when it will never be full, its like,,,,,hmmmmmmmmmmmm (she rubs) (her stomach growls)

Bulma: its like what’s the point of having alot if we will never be full, is there a point to us having alot, I mean who designed our tummy to be like this and why

Bulma: fuck.........I’m gona kill that white mask guy my stomach is so hungry,,, fuck

Blossom: who designed our stomach to always be hungry, who designed this for us....good point

Blossom: they say it was god or some spiritual force, or maybe many gods........hard to say now,,,,,they dont teach us magic anymore......, which some say comes from the gods,,,,,so basically,,,,,its hard for us to know,,,,you know,,,,,,

Videl: maybe the point of life is too control our hunger to have more then we need, or we will become something ugly

Videl: something ugly, maybe a beast that is never satisfied, the more and more, and more, and more,,,,,even if we have to kill someone in the process

Bubbles: something ugly

Bubbles: something ugly,,,hmmmmmmm

Buttercup: ok, so what we know is that our stomach, our greed for making us want more, our hunger for more and more, is what making us worse and worse..........i think we getting close to the point of life.

-the girls are now starting to realize that hunger is what is killing them, maybe they will soon find the point of life.....maybe....I mean do we ever have enough, it seems we always run out, don’t we......hmmmmmm

Sapphire: ok so we have to beat our stomach somehow, but how can we beat something that is never full\

Raven\: by telling it, that we are not gonna feed it what it wants until we feel like it, or can

Raven: what does this have to do with the point of life.

Raven: I mean you know, like what

Sapphire: hello, the reason we signed up for this stupid experiment is because we wanted more then we had, what we had was shit, but it was enough to get us by.,

Videl: if we continue to want more and more, we will never be satisfied.....maybe the point of life is to not want everything, or =you will be unsatisfied.

Blossom: i think that’s a good ANWSER To the meaning of life, I mean, if we wanted only a few things, we wouldn’t be here in the first place, ok that’s what we will tell him.,

-the tv comes on and the white mask decides to speak...........

White mask: so ladies,,,,,i mean girls,,,,,hahahaahahah, more like crack heads,,,, hahahhahhaha

White mask: have you found the answer to the meaning of life....

Videl: yes, we have found the answer to it, the meaning of life is to  not want everything you see or you will turn into something ugly and be unsatisfied.

 White mask: hmmmmmm i suppose, ..........................

White mask: ...........................

White mask; I suppose your answer is correct.

White mask: guards take the girls to the top floor to meet me

Guard: yes sir, will do

-guard takes girls up to the top floor of the building in the middle, the guards also give the girls some hot dogs

White mask; so girls, have you realized that what is killing you is really your stomach, it’s not more than that, you girls realize that, (they rubs) (they hear stomach growls)

Videl: we do, but, why did you have to starve us and make us talk about it

White mask; well,

White mask; the world is shit right now, people doing things just so they can have more and more,,,

White mask: It sickens me

White mask: like they say they love you, but for most , its only when you have something to offer

White mask: and it seems like no matter how much stuff you obtain, it’s just never enough stuff to satisfy you, hunger is what kills you, is what really kills you. 

White mask; most people think that if they have more it will make them happy, but the truth is, the only thing that makes you happy is doing things that make you happy for yourself or someone else,

White mask: buying stuff does not make you happy, it’s just a temporary fix for why you don’t have the balls to wear what you want to wear or do what you want to do,

White mask: hunger is what kills all of us......we do not need to have a bunch of stuff to be happy, these things will never make us happy,

White mask: WHEN THE world realizes this, the bad things that people do to people will stop, it will all stop if we stop wanting to have more and more,

White mask: we don’t need everything girls, to be happy, that was the lesson I was trying to teach you girls..........hunger will only bring you more pain and sadness. Want nothing more, than a few things,

White mask; I do not know who created us,,,,,shit we dont even teach this anymore..........but who ever created us.....wants us, to fight our hunger or we will all die.....at least that’s what I believe. ..................am I right ,,,I do not know..........but.....but it makes me happy every day....you know.......makes me want to get up and deal with whatever shit I’m gonna HAVE TO DEAL WITH......MAKES ME SMILE WHEN IM BROKE............ “)

Videl: yeah I suppose, your right,

-the girls say their good bye and leave.....all but one.............videl stayed behind.

Videl: what you look like

WHite mask: took his mask off and behind was a young man with a pretty face.....

Videl: why did you wear a mask

White mask: because i wanted people to like me for me, not for what i look like i can do for the world

WHite mask: im going to send each of you girls 2000 dollars, because, hunger is what kills me too, I have to give extra money away or invest with it, or I will become evil too.

Videl: hunger is what kills you, (videl smiles)

White mask: that’s right, hunger is what kills me too, even though I’m rich,

-the girls go back home and decided to be happy with what they have, a picture of the building is shown, then the clouds is shown again at the sunset,

                  THE END